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Time by ~thechosendarkone:iconthechosendarkone:

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TIME.


Time will dry away the tears
time will ease the pain
time will make it better
and the sun will shine again.

All the hostile bitterness
that my heart now feels
all of this, they tell me
with time alone, it heals

l wonder if you   know how much
l'm missing you today
and how can you expect
all this pain to go away?

Will the hurt and sorrow
pass just like the years?
or will each day bring me
more torment and more tears?

So will l ever find a way, to leave behind this hell
that might be right........
l just might......
but time alone will tell.
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Author's Comments

l wrote this Poem this morning, as l was sitting ln my room ...with some sad thoughts, about my past.

Hope this makes sense.

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~SoLong-NotGoodNight Jun 13, 2008, 11:43:10 PM
thats cool! though the last stanza didnt really match with the rest...its still really good. i love your work

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I love Paramore ♥

Oh ur a naughty girl! u need a spanking! ...ugh that got gross. --Me

Check out my stuffs...[link] :)

Love me hate me, you'll never break me...unless you do....
:iconthechosendarkone:
~thechosendarkone Jun 13, 2008, 11:47:54 PM
Thank you, lt was written very fast, and that is how lt came to finish, if that makes any sense. But then again, most of my Poems probably don't make any sense at all. Haha. :lol:

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l am the secret to the dark shadows of your empty soul.
Come with me my Precious, come to the dark side!!
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~SoLong-NotGoodNight Jun 13, 2008, 11:59:14 PM
it makes...enuf sense to read it...^^

--
I love Paramore ♥

Oh ur a naughty girl! u need a spanking! ...ugh that got gross. --Me

Check out my stuffs...[link] :)

Love me hate me, you'll never break me...unless you do....
:iconthechosendarkone:
~thechosendarkone Jun 14, 2008, 12:01:04 AM
thank you ever so much, my friend. l really appreciate that. ^_^

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l am the secret to the dark shadows of your empty soul.
Come with me my Precious, come to the dark side!!
:iconsolong-notgoodnight:
~SoLong-NotGoodNight Jun 14, 2008, 12:12:19 AM
your welcome! your so polite

--
I love Paramore ♥

Oh ur a naughty girl! u need a spanking! ...ugh that got gross. --Me

Check out my stuffs...[link] :)

Love me hate me, you'll never break me...unless you do....
:iconthechosendarkone:
~thechosendarkone Jun 14, 2008, 12:14:43 AM
That is how l am, l believe that all people should be treated with equal respect and politeness. After all, at the end of the day, we are human beings. :hug:

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l am the secret to the dark shadows of your empty soul.
Come with me my Precious, come to the dark side!!
:iconunrequitedbreakfast:
~UnrequitedBreakfast Jun 14, 2008, 2:08:58 AM
Beautiful, truly a reflection of what you're feeling when you wrote it.

--
Penned be the unrequited,
For breakfast is a change.
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~Alexysz Jun 14, 2008, 2:53:36 AM
:hug: :glomp: :hug: :glomp: :hug: :glomp: :hug:

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S M I L E
llllllllllllllllll
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~fradeon Jun 14, 2008, 4:13:21 AM
oh..wow... nice ... ^___^

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:heart: ~ [ The beatings will continue until morale improves. ] ~ :heart:
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